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Wednesday, November 14, 2012

Legends/Stories- Lost In Dreams (WIP)

LOST IN DREAMS was inspired by some local legends and stories. Of course, I took some artistic liberty with the stories and changed a few things, mostly the setting. I made all of them take place on one island instead of scattered throughout the area.

The island I chose for my setting is Beacon Island. It's a small island in the Pamlico Sound about 2 miles from Ocracoke Island. Most of Beacon Island is underwater at this time. Only a small section still stands and is a Brown Pelican Sanctuary.

In my story, the entire island still stands (the witches who live there kept it from sinking below the waves) and it's where the Croatoan Indian Tribe made their home. It is also where the Lost Colony Settlers went after they left Roanoke Island. The locations in the following legends and stories have been moved so that they all took place on Beacon Island.

Virginia Dare- The White Doe
Virginia Dare grew up among the Croatoan Indian Tribe to be a beautiful young woman. The shaman of the tribe, Chicamacomico (Chica) became infatuated with her. But Virginia loved another, a young warrior named Okisko. Chica grew jealous and decided if he couldn't have her, no one would. So he cast a spell on her, turning her into a pure white doe. Wanchese, the leader of the Roanoke Tribe, saw the white doe and wanted the skin. He offered a generous reward to anyone who would bring it to him. Warriors from many local tribes began to hunt the deer. Okisko, scared someone would harm his beloved, went to the shaman of the neighboring Chowanoke tribe to ask for help. The Chowanoke shaman was unable to change Virginia back but he gave Okisko the means to protect her. See, the red wolf was plentiful in this area in those days and the local Indians saw it as sacred. It would bring bad luck on your family for generations to harm a red wolf. So the shaman allowed Okisko to turn into a red wolf (but left his human soul inside him so he would continue to think as himself). When the hunters found the pure white deer, a red wolf was with her. It was standing so close to the deer, the hunters were afraid to take a shot for fear of hitting the wolf by accident. For many years, whenever the white doe would be seen, a red wolf would be seen as well. Always standing over the doe as if protecting her.

The Dismal Swamp Witch- Version 1
A powerful witch once lived in the Dismal Swamp. As often happens, the townsfolk were scared of her. After a particularly bad year, they decided that she was the cause and they went into the swamp to kill her. Their dogs chased her through the swamp for 3 days. Finally, exhausted she stopped to rest on an island in the middle of the swamp. She heard the dogs coming and knew she could no longer out run them, so she used the last of her strength and her magic to turn herself into a Cypress tree. When the townsfolk found the dogs circling an old tree, they gave up the chase and went home. The witch was never seen again but to this day an old Cypress tree stands on an island in the middle of the Dismal Swamp.

The Dismal Swamp Witch- Version 2 (usually told around a campfire in the Dismal Swamp)
Other's tell the story a little different. They say that the real story is that an evil shaman/magician was using his magic to lure the people in the area to him so he could use them as human sacrifices to expand his power. A good witch named Elizabeth (some say a relative or descendant of Virginia Dare) went out to the swamp to fight him. They battled but he was too strong for her to defeat so she used the last of her power to lock both of them into the old Cypress tree. The story says that one day, her magic will weaken and they will be released. According to the story, we’ll know the time is coming when her magic will fail when the wolves return to the area. (Usually during this story, someone is hiding in the woods with a tape recording of wolves howling and they play it at the end and the storyteller says something like “oh no, did you hear that? Her magic must be weakening. The evil shaman
could get loose tonight and kill us all in our sleep”)



Those are the 3 stories I mostly drew inspiration from for LOST IN DREAMS. A few other local stories and legends influenced it as well but these are the main ones that helped form the backstory and history of Beacon Island and the people who live there.




Monday, November 5, 2012

Lost In Dreams Main Characters (My WIP)

                 The Main Characters From Lost In Dreams


Ellissa: A 16 year old girl who moves back to the island of her birth after her mom dies. She finds a letter suggesting that her parents were planning to leave the island right before her dad died in order to keep her safe. Safe from what, she has no idea. But her mom did move them away right after her father's funeral and refused to come back. Even for a visit. Ellissa's grandfather, who is giving her the love and attention her mom never gave her, wants her to "carry on the family legacy" and become a witch hunter. There's just one problem, Ellissa is a witch herself. Although, a very reluctant witch. Ellissa hates everything to do with magic and the occult. Occult research is what kept her mom away from home and left Ellissa to take care of her brother and sister all the years they were away from the island. But when Ellissa has one of her "true dreams" and sees her brother and sister killed by magic in the future, she has no choice but to learn enough magic to keep them safe. In order to do this, she has to ask the one boy she's trying to avoid for help. Her feelings for Caleb scare her. They are too strong and too intense. So asking him for help is the last thing she wants to do. But she'll risk anything to save her brother and sister, even her heart.

Caleb: A 17 year old boy whose ancestors date back to the Croatoan Indian Tribe who lived on the island before the first colonists arrived in the new world. He's been raised on stories about an evil shaman who 400 years ago used mind magic to lure the people of the island into becoming human sacrifices. A powerful witch, with the help of a young Indian warrior, cast a spell to lock the shaman's spirit in a tree. But the spell holding him will only last 200 years and then the witch and the warrior have to be reborn to renew it. It's almost time to renew the spell for the 2nd time and somewhere the witch and warrior have been reborn. Caleb's people are on a search to discover who it is. When Ellissa asks him for help, he jumps at the chance. His attraction to her is strong and anything that helps him get to know her better is a good thing in his eyes. He has no idea how much his loyalty to his people is about to be tested.